One day I got a pet it was precious to me because it’s fluffy. It is fun,cute my mom don’t really like it that much because it barks a lot. I got it from my dad because he wanted to look after. It had fleas at the start so the pet have to be outside. It was scary because it ran all around and bite my little brother. It slept funny. It was really small,skinny and it has lot’s of energy. When it has no energy it goes to sleep. It don’t eat a lot and don’t drink that much.
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Hi Alice! My name is Robert! I think your writing is very good! I think it is a dog because you said that it barks a lot. And has the fleas. And you said that is has a lot of energy. I think the dog is a poodle.
Oh I have one more thing to say I am Romania and I can speak two languages! Can you speak two languages? sincerely,
Robert from Illinois.
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Hi Alice
Is it a dog?
I got a hint from the sentence, it barks a lot.
Great clues
From Magnolia
Great story Alice! You’ve done an amazing job at describing your pet (dog I imagine) without actually mentioning what it is. I enjoyed your description as it was very easy to picture your pet in my head, however I was sad to hear that your pet had to stay outside-I hope it didn’t feel too lonely. Well done!
I think it’s a dog.