The Magic Slime

On Monday morning I went to school early because we will go to a trip to learn about living in a forest. When I were at school I went in the bus and the teacher said to choose a buddy. When everybody choose a buddy finish the man started drive to the forest. When everybody at the forest the teacher said” don’t go in to that cave. But me and my buddy went in to the cave when the teacher were talking to the man. Suddenly the slime dripped through the wall. I were shock. We ran to the teacherĀ and never go in to the cave again. THE END

 

2 thoughts on “The Magic Slime”

  1. Fantastic effort, what an interesting story! Make sure you use closing inverted commas around the spoken words. Also make sure that you include punctuation inside the last closing inverted comma.
    Keep writing!

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