The Leak

It all happened when, There was a  huge commotion in the sky. Then it started to rain it was a gentle rain but then… It started to be heavier. Then suddenly…

Water started to dripped down gently “tink tink”. We waited for a while but it didn’t stopped ” Don’t panic ,it will stop at one point” said my dad. But it didn’t.

for a second it started to flood. “ The water just kept gushing out what should we do?” I mumbled. Then not long the water kept rising and rising.

Until it got to my  head i couldn’t breath it was my last breath before I…


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