The game

One day my friend called Max was playing a game called Minecraft he accidentally  fell in the game so he discovered where am he. He see a yellow enderdragon playing with a remarkable singer called Justin Beiber. He talk to the dragon gingerly and the dragon blow fire at him. “Oh no!” shouted my Max, he run to the dragon and said ” Why you do that to him!” and than he found a key at the dragon head. He took the and he found a secret door. He open the door and he was at his room.

2 thoughts on “The game”

  1. Hi Mubarak. I really like the game minecraft too. Do you? I thought your story was interesting and very creative. Why was Justin Bieber with the ender dragon? There were a few spelling errors but that didn’t stop me from enjoying the story. Good job. It would be great if you could comment on my story. Here is the link. http://smppspower.weebly.com/100-wc-week-23/aideen#comments

    From Aideen 🙂

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