My Brother

Hi it’s me Charlotte, yeah it’s me the one whose crazy brother just moved away to a Mental hospital. At school people are talking behind my back whispering. The reason why my brother moved away is because his illness was getting worse. He couldn’t sit still in classes anymore, every time he finished class he would scream frantically and tell me about everyone in his class was covered in crimson blood. He had to go, where he went was misty and dark it was prison like and looked like a grave. Now every time in school people are gossiping even the teachers I feel miserable well, that’s all for now.

3 thoughts on “My Brother”

  1. Mental illness is a brave topic to choose for a 100WC Nean, but an important one to give some thought to. Even in such a short piece, you’ve covered quite some ground, including how unpleasant people can sometimes be when they ‘gossip.’ Did you miss the fifth word though? ‘Shouted?’
    Well done and keep rising to the Challenge.

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