Sprinting to her pets , she suddenly crashed into her house’s front gate . After a while I went into my house and “SURPRISE!!!” “meet your new pet!” My mom yelled “Oh My God it’s a red snake !!!…I love it!” I told my mom excitedly my mom stared at the clock “ooh its time for me to go to work ,bye honey ” before my mom went I hugged her . My friend cycled to my house for a little while to see my new pet
on the next day , I went to check my snake but he was gone
it’s a mystery!!!
Great story!!! Puifai:)
Well done Puifai on your story this week. I liked your opening sentence, it got my attention straight away. You’ve done a great job fitting in the prompt words.
Well done.
Ms Brennock
Team 100 w/c
Dublin
Ireland
Hi ?. Puifai,
I like the part when you got shocked when your mom said “Surprise ?!!! and keep up the superb work. Please comment on my story at https://mrrussell.100wc.net/WK17:-The-Toy-Snake/
From Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class in Waterford,Ireland
very good