Ghosts in Town

“It is time to go shopping!” Alexa squealed through the phone.

“No. Can’t you see that it is almost midnight?!” I said, probably exaggerating for it was only 9:00 at night. “You should be in bed.”

“I know, but can we still go? Please Chloe please?!

“Fine, lets go.”

I biked my way to Alexa’s house. When I got there, we biked to town. There, we went to every shop still open.

“I’m tired. Let’s go to the town square.” said Alexa.

On our way there, it became very chilly. We pulled our jackets tighter. We sat together on a bench, then suddenly realized something important. There were….. GHOSTS IN TOWN!!!!!!!


2 thoughts on “Ghosts in Town”

  1. Hi Natalie
    Thank you for sharing your writing with us. This must be a very scary time for girls as it is getting colder and they realise they are in a ghost town. I wonder what made them know straight away that they were in this sort of town? Did they stay in town with the ghosts or did they race back home? What would you do?
    Keep up the great work.
    Ms McKenzie

  2. Nice story, don’t forget to finish your speech marks at the end of the speech- otherwise really good use of this. Also you don’t need to overuse the exclamation, one is enough for the reader. Instead of something important- could you describe the ghosts in some way?

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