Computer Mayhem

You know why? I always hate losing my little sister at Nintendo switch, Ninja sticks… it’s because SHE TALKS ABOUT IT FOR THE REST OF THE DAY!!!!!!! By the way my name is Paige my little sister is called Pandy we love to play Ninja sticks, it’s our favorite game. One day we were playing Ninja sticks and suddenly…the ground was shaking and the Ninja sticks in our computer started to grow! We went running into the woods and the sticks followed us it was like they wanted something from us. We remembered our skills from the game, we did our flying kick and hit them straight in the face.

7 thoughts on “Computer Mayhem”

  1. Hi Nean
    Thank you for sharing your writing with us. I thought for a while that your story would be about the relationship between the two sisters but then it unexpectedly changed. I like how you chose for your beginning a situation that your audience would relate to -using Nintendo and the rivalry between siblings. I wonder what will happen next in your story. Will the flying kicks fix the problem of the Ninja sticks or will it just slow them down!
    Keep up the great work.
    Ms McKenzie (Team 100WC, Christchurch, New Zealand)

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